Wikipedia:Peer review/Michael Thevis/archive1

Michael Thevis
Just looking for some helpful information or tips. Wanted to try and get this as a featured article.65.71.127.228 05:50, 6 August 2005 (UTC)
 * It looked fine to me, except for the unresolved issue of his presumed demise. Perhaps a little too much sub-partitioning of the text by major sections. What a charming fellow... &mdash; RJH 14:49, 9 August 2005 (UTC)