Wikipedia:Peer review/Military Affiliate Radio System/archive1

Military Affiliate Radio System
I worked fairly hard on getting this page done. I didn't want to elaborate on too many things just a down to earth article that people would enjoy reading without getting overwhelmed. KB3JUV 13:49, 22 August 2005 (UTC)KB3JUV


 * Overall it looks pretty good. I did have one or two issues, however. The expression "MARS Proud, Professional, and Ready" looks like a slogan of some type, and the way it is employed on the page does not appear very encyclopedic. If it is a slogan, you could explain it as such, and not present it in the manner of an advertisement. Both "Department of Defense" and "Armed Forces Day" can be linked to their own pages; "intellegence" is spelled incorrectly, and the page could do with a category or two. Thank you for your contribution. :) &mdash; RJH 15:43, 24 August 2005 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the comment, I fixed and added all the things you talked about.KB3JUV 17:35, 24 August 2005 (UTC)KB3JUV