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Minnesota Vikings
I would just like to get some feedback on how to get this article to at least GA status. RyguyMN 23:40, 2 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Nice article. Just a quick reading:
 * You need to make consistent citation style (see WP:CITE) because I found external links mixed with footnote citation. I suggest you to use the footnote style.
 * The "ocean of blue links" somehow confuses readers. There are a lot of links to click, distracting a reader to read the whole article. I suggest editors reduce them, for instances, not to link all the years because they are not related with the subject.
 * There are a lot of redundancies in the article with the History of the Minnesota Vikings. Please consider trimming the history section (see WP:SUMMARY).
 * The see also (and similar) templates in the middle of a section also distracts a reader. Consider to put it just below the section heading or make an internal wikilink.
 * The subsections of the "Franchise traditions, trends" section are still stubby. Please also remove "To listen to a sample of the Viking horn go to:(Vikings Tailgating) (ext. link)" statement. It is unnecessary and looks like an internal spam link (see WP:SPAM).
 * So good luck. &mdash; Indon ( reply ) &mdash; 10:45, 3 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the comments Indon, I will focus in on those. RyguyMN 23:55, 3 May 2007 (UTC)