Wikipedia:Peer review/Mirage (The Incredibles)/archive1

Mirage (The Incredibles)
I'm striving for featured article status. Is there anything wrong with the article? --71.105.11.148 21:30, 18 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Per WP:MOS, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example,  ==The Biography==  would be changed to  ==Biography== .


 * Please alphabetize the categories and interlanguage links.


 * This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 2(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
 * Thanks, AndyZ t 22:06, 19 May 2006 (UTC)

Thanks, I'll try to fix it. So is there any other other suggestions? --71.105.15.11 16:30, 20 May 2006 (UTC)

Try to create a in pouplar culture section, like how important was this character in pouplar culture, etc. Please look at the Bulbasaur article as a example. Thanks Jaranda wat's sup 19:52, 20 May 2006 (UTC)

Okay, I'll try, but I have to admit that some featured articles don't have popular culture sections. So is there any other improvements? --71.118.76.132 18:19, 28 May 2006 (UTC)