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Missing My Baby
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to bring the article to FAC. It already passed GA so I hope to achieve my first FA article
 * Previous peer review

Thanks, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  01:10, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

Comments The Rambling Man (talk) 17:43, 3 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Lead is possibly a little too long, see WP:LEAD, I would imagine just two paras to summarise an article of this size.
 * Jona yo! Selena 4 ever  22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
 * No images available?
 * It was not a single. Best, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
 * No but any kind of free image available to brighten it up? The Rambling Man (talk) 17:55, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "to help her crossover attempt." crossover to what?
 * Jona yo! Selena 4 ever  22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "mid-tempo" just linking tempo looks odd here.
 * Jona yo! Selena 4 ever  22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
 * " influences of urban and soul music" not of, from. or "is influenced by urban..."
 * Jona yo! Selena 4 ever  22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "Selena had used these techniques to emphasize the song's title and its central theme." no need for "had".
 * Jona yo! Selena 4 ever  22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "The lyrics are about the love felt " -> "The lyrics describe the love..."
 * Jona yo! Selena 4 ever  22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
 * As usual, I'd suggest a quick copyedit from someone who can do it much better than me.
 * ✅ Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Use same name in infobox for Quintilla as writer and producer.
 * What do you mean? Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
 * As a writer you have his full name and as a producer just his surname. I know it's odd but in info boxes we do tend to repeat full names.  The Rambling Man (talk) 17:55, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
 * ""Missing My Baby" was written by Selena y Los Dinos backup singer Pete Astudillo and produced by Selena's brother and principal record producer A.B. Quintanilla III." almost verbatim copy of the lead. Try to mix it up a little.
 * Jona yo! Selena 4 ever  22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Why have a single row table sortable?
 * What do you mean? Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
 * The table which has one row is sortable. It's pointless having it as "sortable".  The Rambling Man (talk) 17:55, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "Full Force - backing vocalists" en-dash.
 * Jona yo! Selena 4 ever  22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Ref 2 needs a sub, ref 3 doesn't but is a very similar source, really?
 * I don't see the difference, the only thing is the year (1993) and the editor Burr, Ramiro. Best, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Please link things the first time, not the second, e.g. Austin American-Statesman. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:55, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Ref titles should comply with WP:DASH ie. spaced en-dash, not hyphen.
 * Jona yo! Selena 4 ever  22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Denver Post is The Denver Post.
 * Jona yo! Selena 4 ever  22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Check other publication names.
 * Jona yo! Selena 4 ever  22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
 * I have most issues, mind a second look? Best,  Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)