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Mobile, Alabama
I've listed this article for peer review because I've just finished a revision based on feedback from a failed GA review. I would like to know if these problems have be remedied and find out what other issues remain. I know that some of the grammar is still weak but I've been looking at this article for so long that I need some fresh insights.

Thanks,

Altairisfar (talk) 07:16, 19 November 2007 (UTC)


 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style. If you would find such a review helpful, please click here. Thanks, APR t 12:42, 22 November 2007 (UTC)