Wikipedia:Peer review/Money in the Bank (2018)/archive1

Money in the Bank (2018)


I've listed this article for peer review because I wish to take it to GA status. It will be my first attempt at taking a Professional Wrestling article to GA. Constructive comments and feedback are most welcome. Thanks. — Ssven2  Looking at you, kid 10:31, 10 June 2023 (UTC)

Comments from Z1720
Comments after a quick skim:


 * A lot of the information about the match relies upon "Pro Wrestling Dot Net." Are there other sources that can verify the information, too?
 * Added Wrestleview's article to the match info. —  Ssven2  Looking at you, kid 08:05, 20 June 2023 (UTC)


 * The paragraphs in the Reception section are quite long. Any way to split them up?
 * Reception section falls into the "X says Y" pattern. I suggest reading WP:RECEPTION and organising the section into categories like performance, technical ability, etc.

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 15:03, 15 June 2023 (UTC)