Wikipedia:Peer review/Monstercat/archive2

Monstercat
I've listed this article for peer review because I am working to get this article to GA status and am looking for steps to improve the article before nomination.
 * Previous peer review

Thanks, Jalen Folf   (talk)  06:29, 3 January 2020 (UTC)


 * Thoughts from Lee V:
 * Hi . Here's a few things I picked up on.


 * Lede
 * "independent electronic dance music record label" - WP:SEAOFBLUE, could do with rewording/removing some links.
 * The refs in the lede aren't really neccesary. Should be cited in prose.
 * Is the mascot really the most important part of the article? I'd move it down the lede, if not remove entirely.
 * meme should be linked.


 * General prose
 * I think an "overview" section wouldn't be misplaced. It jumps straight into the history of the orginasation without saying what it is, what it does, etc.
 * "Beginning" is a weird title, something like "founding" makes more sense.
 * Is it normal to put DOBs for people not in BLPs?
 * Whilst I know British Colombia is in Canada, the article doesn't mention this is Canadian outside of the lede sentence and infobox.
 * (born 1989)[4] and Ari Paunonen (born 1989/90[4]) - refs should go ideally after punctuation.
 * Today, the label signs artists on a single-track basis - seems out of place on a section on origins.
 * The massive quote borders on copyright issues. Even if not, it's quite promotional to copy a press release like this.
 * This happens a lot
 * Article is very "In X month, Y year..."
 * There's some sentence structure issues, with paragraphs often being just one or two sentences.
 * Does the dynamic list for the current artist land a little close to WP:FANCRUFT? Seems a little in depth for me.
 * Are all the albums notable? There's some that have articles. If they are notable, they should be WP:REDLINKed.

Also be aware Earwigs CV check comes up with this:

I hope some of the above is helpful to you to take the item towards GA. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:46, 18 January 2020 (UTC)