Wikipedia:Peer review/Montsalvat/archive1

Montsalvat
Montsalvat is an artist colony in Melbourne, Australia, and I feel this article, with a little support and help can become a featured article on wikipedia. Don't be turned down by the fact that it isnt a world-known issue or subject or object -that shouldnt mean the difference between featured articles and non-featured articles.
 * Need Help With - Spelling, and grammar, needs to be checked multiple times for spelling and grammar mistakes. I would greatly welcome any comments and or suggestions, and will take every one very seriously. Thank you to anyone who helps Nick carson 08:51, 14 May 2006 (UTC)

Thanks, AndyZ t 14:45, 14 May 2006 (UTC)
 * Some suggestions:
 * Expand the lead to fit WP:LEAD.
 * Change the section Sources to References, and cite the refences in according with WP:CITE and WP:CITE/ES. WP:FOOTNOTEs will also be helpful.
 * Per WP:MOS, heading should not start with "The" or repeat the article's title whenever possible.
 * Per WP:MOSDATE, years without full dates should not be linked.
 * Please provide metric conversions for units of measurements (for example, provide the number of square meters in parentheses for 12 acres (48,562 m2). See WP:MOSNUM)


 * Have spent a few hours fixing things up:


 * Cited references
 * Deleted links to minor years without exact dates attached
 * Added metric conversion
 * Expanded the intro/lead (included a list of the types of artists in residence)
 * Added Montsalvat to the list of art colonies
 * Fixed up heading begining with "The"
 * Changed section "Sources" to "References"

If somone could proof read it for me, and comment on my method of referencing, that would be greatly apreciated. Let me know what else needs to be done, thanks again Nick carson 09:45, 15 May 2006 (UTC)