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Mormon handcart pioneers
This is my first peer review request, so hopefully I didn't kill any babies or anything by doing something wrong. I spotted this article on a collaboration of the month page and after reading through it, I must say it is quite good, probably GA standard, IMHO. I'm asking for any feedback relating to what improvements need to be made before this meets the featured article criteria. As part of this, input from those unfamiliar with this topic is most welcome, as we need to know what needs elaboration. --Lethargy 06:26, 28 July 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 17:06, 1 August 2006 (UTC)