Wikipedia:Peer review/Mount Lowe Railway/archive1

Mount Lowe Railway
Requesting peer review for GA or A-Class nomination.--Magi Media 07:13, 8 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 17:15, 8 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Looking through it, I can tell you that the images aren't properly used. They are too large and not distributed through out the article properly. The gallery has to go, since the images are public domain, just put them in Commons. Also I see little point in the 'Descriptive inventory' section, its a list of very specific details, which isn't really meeting the 'summary form' goal when writing articles. There are some broken footnotes, like in the 'The Alpine Division' section. Also I see some external jumps which need to be converted into footnotes or put under external links depending on their purpose. Anyway, I'm certain the article will meet GA and probably A-Class after some copyediting. Good Luck! - Tutmosis  21:14, 8 November 2006 (UTC)


 * In response to the above critiques the articl has been respectively edited. My appreciation goes out to Tutmosis for the commentary. I hope I get an "A".--Magi Media 03:19, 15 November 2006 (UTC)