Wikipedia:Peer review/Muhajir (Pakistan)/archive2

Muhajir (Pakistan)


I've listed this article for peer review because I'm planning to nominate this article for GA.

Thanks, FLA-ALP-1 (talk) 04:37, 18 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments from Z1720
Comments after a quick skim:
 * "formal Hindi draws these aspects from Sanskrit; consequently, the two languages' mutual intelligibility effectively decreases as the factor of formality increases." needs a citation
 * Why doesn't ref 192 not have a page number?
 * Ref 310: Answers.com is considered an unreliable source.
 * Refs 132, 150, 300, and others: quotes are usually not necessary in a reference anymore and can be removed.

Hope these help. Z1720 (talk) 03:29, 24 May 2023 (UTC)