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Municipality of Strathfield and History of the Strathfield area
Any hints on what else I should add to the main article would be appreciated. In the history section, what do you think needs to be fixed on that? - Ta bu shi da yu 15:00, 29 Dec 2004 (UTC)
 * Intro for the history article needs tweaking; and the Corruption section there is current, and should be in the main article (maybe under Politics). For the main, maybe there's more to be said about its culture, economy, or any particular significance? Rd232 18:05, 1 Jan 2005 (UTC)
 * Have added info on the culture, added stuff on the corruption in a Politics section. Not sure what to do with the Economy bit. The history article I'll tweak soon. - Ta bu shi da yu 06:28, 21 Jan 2005 (UTC)