Wikipedia:Peer review/Music of Maryland/archive1

Music of Maryland
I'm hunting for photos, but other than that, I think this article is pretty good. Does anyone have any suggestions? Tuf-Kat 19:48, 25 September 2005 (UTC)

OK. Just some general problems: Hope that helps, take care! Ryan Norton T 15:19, 28 September 2005 (UTC)
 * 1) Too many red links!!!
 * 2) First paragraph of intro could use some lengthening
 * 3) "Music history" - paragraphs in lead too short
 * 4) "Folk music" - second paragraph a little short
 * 5) "Popular music" - second paragraph a little short
 * 6) Maybe see about moving that image someplace....
 * 7) Could use some external links