Wikipedia:Peer review/Nellie Kim/archive1

Nellie Kim
This article is my first big affair in Wikipedia. I started it about a year ago. It had overgone major work since then and seems pretty comprehensive, well-structured and neutral for me. I want to receive comments and a broader perspective on how it may be improved. Cmapm 12:10, 5 April 2006 (UTC)
 * The lead is very crowded, I think you should move the colored image further down. Also, the fact that the first sentence is written in the past gives the impression that she's dead. How about, instead of saying "was a Soviet gymnast", put "is a former Soviet gymnast"? --Fritz Saalfeld (Talk) 08:02, 6 April 2006 (UTC)
 * Thank you for suggestions. I changed it to "a retired Soviet gymnast", which I see to "comply" with other similar articles. Did you mean, that the lead "is crowded" only due to the image or that it's style should be adjusted too? I'll also think of moving the image somewhere below later. More comments and opinions are welcome! Cmapm 14:57, 6 April 2006 (UTC)
 * I moved an image into Olympics section. If you wish, please, have a look there and comment on its size and placement. Cmapm 06:39, 7 April 2006 (UTC)
 * I was refering only to the image. It's much better now. --Fritz Saalfeld (Talk) 14:16, 7 April 2006 (UTC)


 * You do realize the picture is cutting off most of the text...also the image should be farther down. -Osbus 21:37, 6 April 2006 (UTC)
 * Thank you, I reduced its size. More suggestions on the article's current state are welcomed very much. Cmapm 06:39, 7 April 2006 (UTC)