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Nelson Mandela
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because it is already a GA and I want to know if could possibly be a candidate for GA status? If not, what is it missing?
 * Previous peer review

Thanks,  Miss Bono  [zootalk]  13:25, 22 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Do you mean a candidate for FA status? -- Khazar2 (talk) 13:34, 27 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Oh, yes Khazar2, sorry I meant a candidate for FA.   Miss Bono  [zootalk]  15:18, 2 September 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * The prose looks good, generally.
 * "he established a new constitution": he promulgated a new constitution
 * "kraal": Our article on the word says it's a corral, but you've linked it to something else, and "corral" wouldn't make sense here.
 * "their transition from boys to men; the rite over, he was given the name": Would anything important be lost here by "... and was given the name"?
 * "his BA ... his BA exams": his bachelor's degree ... his final exams [if they were final exams]
 * I got down to Defiance Campaign and Transvaal ANC Presidency: 1950–1954. - Dank (push to talk) 02:36, 10 September 2013 (UTC)