Wikipedia:Peer review/Neri Oxman/archive1

Neri Oxman
A GA attempt for an american artist/architect/academic. I am working on getting images of each piece. Thoughts on both format and content are welcome, including overall structure - since this bridges a few fields. Pinging, , , for good measure :)

Many thanks, – SJ  +  08:04, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Some passing comments: Make "Early life and career" into its own level two header, same for Mediated Matter. Your call where philosophy would end up. Shalom Life looks like a dubious honor—the site's dead for me right now but offhand I doubt it's a reliable/noteworthy distinction. Usually a different secondary source will cover it if it's a distinction worth calling out. A bit heavy on the CV details—I'd go for a few selected works rather than the catalogue raisonné. Perhaps limit to the works that are discussed in secondary sources, same for gallery shows/exhibitions. I'd wrap the talks into the career section and only cover them via secondary sources (not primary source links). Publications may be better off in its own bibliography section, depending on her body of writing. Photos: make sure we have email verification of author permission (OTRS) for both the photo and the 3D work (also mind the non-US copyright, if the sculpture is in Israel or another country). I didn't see Creative Commons permission for the images culled from her site, and I don't see separate photographer/artist permissions on most of the images, so something to check czar  07:47, 3 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I'll work on rebalancing to focus on selected works. Image releases were via email; I'll get work permission as well.  + Interesting pointer to Natalie Jeremijenko.  –  SJ  +  15:06, 4 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Okay, I've cleaned up the early life & other sections a bit. I left Education separate from Career for now.  Working on improved secondary sources for the works, and papers in other fields citing the cross-disciplinary work. –  SJ  +  01:20, 12 August 2016 (UTC)