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Neville Chamberlain
I've contributed quite a lot of this article in most areas (bar his European policy) but am concerned the article is rather single authored in places. Also it's a bit long and could use a bit of condensing. Timrollpickering 15:55, 28 Dec 2004 (UTC)


 * The lead section could do with some expansion. - Ta bu shi da yu 01:57, 24 Jan 2005 (UTC)
 * "European Policy" seems to be editorialising. Can we cut this back a bit? Apart from this, this is a great article, very informative and the length is just right :-) Ta bu shi da yu 06:00, 24 Jan 2005 (UTC)