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New Albion
I've listed this article for peer review because I have edited many changes since a previous peer review was archived. I believe the edits are improvements in the article yet this is unconfirmed by others, and I do believe this article may reach a Featured Article status with assistance from advisors. I believe a necessary improvement is in the introduction, yet I hesitate to revise the introduction because it was not so identified for the reasons I believe it should be revised. I believe it is somewhat too detailed.
 * Previous peer review

Thank you and kind regards, Hu Nhu (talk) 21:25, 26 March 2019 (UTC)