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New Jersey State Constitution
I've worked forever on this article. I got it to GA awhile ago. Forgot about it, then realized I wanted to get it to FA. So here it goes. Yell at me if you must. Evan(Salad dressing is the milk of the infidel!) 19:06, 4 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 02:52, 5 November 2006 (UTC)
 * I've made several edits and included some comments on pending issues in the Discussion page. Patiwat 00:49, 6 November 2006 (UTC)
 * I have made several edits to the article, and have the following comments:
 * Is the word "instantiate" used correctly? Webster translates this as "to represent (an abstraction) by a concrete instance, e.g., heroes instantiate ideals." The article uses the term in a manner similar to "establishes," "authorizes," or "allows." I'd suggest using a more appropriate word.
 * Is it neccesary to boldface "Article X" the first time it is mentioned in a section? It doesn't really add anything to the article, and also seems redundant, given that in most cases, it is the first word of the section.
 * Someone please copyedit the last paragraph of Article XI section and the Criticisms section.
 * The notes section should be merged with the references section.


 * -- Patiwat 00:11, 6 November 2006 (UTC)