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New Rochelle High School


I've listed this article for peer review because this article underwent a copyedit and sources were added to the article. It is possible this might be a GAN one day. It wouldn't hurt if a peer review was done to evaluate the article in general.

Thanks, The Cadillac Ranger (talk) 00:47, 3 April 2024 (UTC)

Comments from Z1720
Comments after a quick skim:

For a template of how the article can be formatted, see Amador Valley High School, a featured article on Wikipedia. Z1720 (talk) 01:41, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Per WP:LEDECITE, citations are not generally necessary in the lede because the information should be in the body of the article. The lede should be a summary of the rest of the article.
 * The history section needs a lot more information, especially about pre-1968 information. When was it founded? When was the campus built?
 * Campus and history should be separated, so history gets its own level 2 headings.
 * "To create a more personalized atmosphere," This is an example of promotional language and shouldn't be in the article. I suggest removing this an anything similar to this. For more information, see WP:NPOV.
 * Most of the Co and extracurricular activities are not notable because they can be found at most schools. Same with Interscholastic sports. I suggest making this into prose instead of a list.
 * Every notable alumni needs a citation.


 * Hello Z1720, in regards to what you have said, I have done the following so far:
 * Included the year the school opened, and how it was originally known as Woodrow Wilson Memorial High School
 * Made the history section a level 2 heading
 * Removed "To create a more personalized atmosphere" from the Academics section.
 * I still do have questions though. You mentioned how there are some co and extracurricular activities that are non-notable. Which of these activities do you think I should remove? The Cadillac Ranger (talk) 02:14, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Remove all extracurriculars that are not talked about in reliable, independent secondary sources. Z1720 (talk) 02:24, 24 May 2024 (UTC)