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Nhat Hanh
The article about Thich Nhat Hanh has been evolving slowly over time, and I would like to see it gain featured article status. I've been working on references for the article to include sources outside of "official" or "friends of TNH" sites to make it more reliable. At this point, I'd love to hear additional opinions on how to improve the writing and fine tune the article.
 * Should the article contain information about TNH's teaching? A discussion about this can be found on the archived talk page. The snippet about his teachings that was in the article in the past sounded more like a press release than a good analysis. If the teachings are included I would think the focus should be:
 * How his teachings are different from other teachers
 * How have his teachings contributed to a "Western Buddhism"
 * What points of criticism have there been about his teachings from others?
 * Other issues/points of interest?
 * Footnotes and references
 * Is the best format being used on the page?
 * What, if anything, should be improved?

Thank you for your time and efforts in reading the article and makeing recommendations.Nightngle 15:12, 25 July 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 01:39, 26 July 2006 (UTC)