Wikipedia:Peer review/Nolan Godfrey/archive1

Nolan Godfrey
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Thanks, Andythomas2011Andrew Thomas 07:24, 10 April 2012 (UTC)

Comments The Rambling Man (talk) 20:14, 14 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Not sure this is an "arts" PR, but anyway...
 * All references need to be reformatted to avoid bare URLs, they need titles, publication dates, etc.
 * Avoid links like the one you have for "MTV's Teen Wolf " in the middle of prose.
 * Avoid # to mean "number" in prose.
 * "UMass Amherst" use the full title.
 * " 9-3 " use en-dash per WP:DASH, see many other issues on the article.
 * "Semi-final" why is "Semi" capitalised?
 * " (see Table 1.0 below)." what?!
 * "through his company, FaceOff Club. US Lacrosse has invited him to be a featured speaker at their 2011 National Convention in Baltimore and he returned again to speak in 2012.[23] Godfrey's business pursuits extend also to Claddagh Lacrosse and Southern Combat Lacrosse." again, too many links here which aren't in-line refs.
 * Statistics section, are the tables compliant with MOS:DTT so that screen-readers can read the information?