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Nordelta
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like this article to reach GA status someday. I would like to see whether the most recent edits made to it are heading in the right way and I would like to recieve specefic feedback on how to make the article better and address its lacks.

Thanks,

♠  TomasBat   02:11, 28 November 2007 (UTC)

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APR t 02:45, 29 November 2007 (UTC)
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