Wikipedia:Peer review/Northeastern United States tornado outbreak of 1989/archive1

Northeastern United States tornado outbreak of 1989
Believe I have done all I can, need a second set of eyes to do a copyedit, and any other comments would be appreciated. - Running On  Brains  04:15, 4 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Still seeking comments, please. - Running On  Brains  14:56, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I'm not that experienced an editor, but here are some thoughts:
 * It would be nice if the Template:Tornado chart template (or the area around it) would somehow link to the Fujita scale article in an intuitive way.
 * There are some length measurements (e.g. size of hail) that are given in English units with no SI equivalents.
 * The last paragraph (second paragraph of "Historic outbreak") section is worded a little awkwardly -- e.g. repetition of phrase "this area of the world".
 * Aside from those minor nitpicks, though, it looks great to me! --Iknowyourider (t c) 19:04, 17 June 2007 (UTC)