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Nuclear weapons and the United States
I wrote this up a few weeks ago, and think I hit most of the major bases. My goal is to develop a prototype article which could be used for all of the nuclear powers (and non-nuclear ones as well, potentially) which would give a brief synopsis of the country's involvement with nuclear weapons &mdash; historically and up through the current status. I'm concerned with making sure the article is understandable by people without much knowledge of military jargon or nuclear weapons minutiae and keeping a neutral POV. The article is currently a little tipsy at 38K, as well. Any suggestions and editing eyes would be appreciated. Many thanks. --Fastfission 7 July 2005 21:45 (UTC)
 * This is great work. One element that I would expect to have in an article covering all aspects of nuclear weapons and the United States is more on the concerns over nuclear attack. It would be good to have a section on various defensive programs, such as Dew Line, Duck and Cover, and SDI, as well as something on the public fears and the cultural effects of the threat of nuclear war on the United States. Conversely the page could also be reamed to something more specific, such as "United States nuclear weapon program." The only other concern is that the lead does not yet meet the lead guidelines. - SimonP July 8, 2005 00:30 (UTC)