Wikipedia:Peer review/Oil/archive1

Oil
Very important topic as it is *meant* to summarize all the different types of oil. Seriosuly needs work - suggestions/comments? — Wackymacs 06:58, 19 June 2006 (UTC)


 * The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and may or may not be accurate for the article in question (due to possible javascript errors/uniqueness of articles).


 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.


 * Please alphabetize the categories and interlanguage links.


 * This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 2(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.


 * The article will need references. See WP:CITE and WP:V for more information.


 * This article may be a bit list-weighty; in other words, some of the lists should be converted to prose (paragraph form).


 * Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that the it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 2a.
 * You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions (and the javascript checklist; see the last paragraph in the lead) for further ideas.
 * Thanks, Andy t 15:36, 19 June 2006 (UTC)

Let's start with one issue: the artcle needs expantion, it is now barerly more then a stub. Second, the article has no references. These issues should be addressed first, then we can go into other details.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus Talk 21:53, 24 June 2006 (UTC)