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Only Fools and Horses
I've been working on this for a few weeks now, hoping to get it up to GA and (eventually) FA standard. I'm just looking for general comments and criticisms of the article; what it needs to bring it up to standard, what needs to be sourced, added or clarified etc. All comments will be much appreciated. SteveO 17:22, 15 September 2006 (UTC)

Several things:

-Burn the Trivia section, then spit on its corpse. Sorry to be so brusque, but this article will not reach FA with a Trivia section.

-An article this size needs much more than 18 citations. Sometimes whole sections go uncited.

-The Characters section needs prose beyond just the descriptions of the individual characters. You could talk about the themes that developed between the characters, their interactions, and so forth. Or you can even talk about why certain actors and actresses were chosen for the roles.

-The Merchandise section needs to be either expanded or merged with the Cultural impact section.

-Needs a good copyedit. Ask a user that has experience with these types of articles to help out.UberCryxic 02:19, 17 September 2006 (UTC)


 * Thank you for responding. I sympathise with how you feel about trivia sections. Anything worthwhile can be merged into the main article. I'll try and rectify what you suggested. Thanks once again. SteveO 11:23, 17 September 2006 (UTC)