Wikipedia:Peer review/Operation Bot Roast/archive1

Operation Bot Roast
Created article. Seems to be taking shape. Would like some feedback. Thanks! Jerry G. Sweeton Jr. 14:19, 20 June 2007 (UTC)

Review by Reaper X
Alright, I gave this a quick glance... Besides that, just add any more sources you can and keep expanding dude! Cheers. -- Reaper  X  05:57, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I made these edits myself, as per the Manual of Style, and what I thought would flow better.
 * "an operation by the FBI to track down bot herder or hackers...". That strikes me as bad grammar. Maybe "to track down bot herders" or "to track down a bot herder"? Or is it supposed to be said like that?
 * Same issue in The Results section.
 * The Abilities of bot herders section could be changed into prose instead of point-form.
 * Is there any rough dates of when this took place?