Wikipedia:Peer review/Operation Varsity/archive1

Operation Varsity

 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for June 2008.
 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for June 2008.

This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because it has gone through two previous peer reviews by the Military History project, as well as a GA and A-Class review, but I would like a wider group of editors to look it over before I evetually put it towards an FAC. Any and all comments are welcome, as it all counts towards making Operation Varsity a better article!

Thanks, Skinny87 (talk) 18:18, 19 June 2008 (UTC)

Comments from
 * You said you wanted to know what to work on before taking to FAC, so I looked at the sourcing and referencing with that in mind. I reviewed the article's sources as I would at FAC. The sourcing looks good. (I fixed one typo in a reference).
 * Hope this helps. Please note that I don't watchlist Peer Reviews I've done. If you have a question about something, you'll have to drop a note on my talk page to get my attention. (My watchlist is already WAY too long, adding peer reviews would make things much worse.) 21:27, 19 June 2008 (UTC)