Wikipedia:Peer review/Oral sex in Islamic law/archive1

Oral sex in Islamic law
I present FYC this fascinating and topsy-turvily written article. Very interesting glimpse into ancient attitudes. Obviously someone very knowledgeable about Islamic law had done much work, but this person or group have alas a madcap command of our fine and supple English tongue. But I don't think it's anything that a little expansion and minor research, combined with a lot of formatting, couldn't fix. I've done a little work here and there but hardly know where to begin. But as I said it's very interesting stuff. And in sum, I want to see this article one day on the main page as an FA! Come on you Islamic scholars and wikipedia aces, help me!--Pablosecca 17:43, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
 * You need to properly cite all of those [#] external links using &lt;ref&gt; tags. Sebi  &#91; talk &#93; 09:54, 7 July 2007 (UTC)