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Oscar Robertson
Hi, this is the article of NBA great Oscar Robertson. I have just majorly rewritten it as of WP:WIAGA, so I lack a bit of distance to my work. However, I would like to shape it into a GA and perhaps eventually a FA, and ask for your help :D So, general questions:


 * Compelling prose?
 * Formally right?
 * Accessible enough for non-experts, yet not too verbose for experts?

Thanks for reading, Onomatopoeia 11:32, 31 January 2007 (UTC)
 * I gave a little copyedit, and altered some wording in it. Looks very good I can't really recommend anything else because if I saw anything I objected to I changed it myself. Quadzilla99 19:16, 31 January 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 23:05, 5 February 2007 (UTC)