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Otis Redding
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A user suggested to take this article to PR. I asked the nominator to fail it. According to him, it currently fails in "Major aspects:" "Prose quality:" and "MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:", this should be addressed before I put this to GAN. Any comments are welcomed. Thank you. ♫GoP♫ T C N 12:25, 16 November 2011 (UTC)