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Otto Plath
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I have substantially improved it since I first created it in 2012 and, despite its relatively short length, I think it has potential to be a decent article. I’d like to have other editors' feedback about any ways I could improve this article, and opinions on the current article quality. Note that this is my first peer review request.

Thanks, Philpill691 (talk) 23:12, 17 February 2014 (UTC)