Wikipedia:Peer review/Oujé-Bougoumou, Quebec

Oujé-Bougoumou, Québec


There was a overhaul to the page but it requires critiquing. Anyone up for it? I'd love to do it myself but my own bias causes me to see it with rose tinted lenses. Heliatrope Fish (talk) 09:29, 29 January 2010 (UTC)


 * I reviewed the page and made some minor changes, mostly formatting and layout. Your additions are good, maybe just a few more inline citations would be welcome. And if you are up to it, the article should be expanded with more history, culture, economy, etc. Keep up the good work. -- P 1 9 9 • TALK 14:17, 29 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Agreed with P199, you've made some really nice and very welcome improvements to the article. Our coverage of remote northern communities in most provinces tends to be weak, simply because we have fewer editors who have real depth of knowledge about them — we definitely need more of this. (Any chance that you have the ability to spruce up the other Cree villages in Eeyou Istchee too? :-)
 * At any rate, my only comment at this time is about the references: we don't like to reference things with just a web URL, because then what happens is that if the site ever goes down, we lose the reference — instead a reference should be formatted to include the name of the page and the organization that published it (and the date, if possible) as well. For instance, reference #5 shouldn't be just http://www.ainc-inac.gc.ca/ai/scr/qc/aqc/prof/Ouje-eng.asp
 * Instead, it should read something more like Oujé Bougoumou First Nation. Indian and Northern Affairs Canada, December 9, 2008.
 * That way, if something ever happens to the INAC page, the reference is still valid — since we know who and what it was, we can either try to track it down again, or we can just remove the weblink and still have a wholly valid reference.
 * So could you change the references to the more detailed format when you get a chance? (You can just copy and paste this one if you want.) Bearcat (talk) 06:25, 17 February 2010 (UTC)