Wikipedia:Peer review/Out-of-body experience/archive1

Out-of-body experience
I think this long article requires more cleanup and possibly some restructuring. Should some of the quotes be eliminated or moved to a Wikiquote page? Could it be reworded to be more concise? An article with this much information, were it generally better-written and if it had a few well-chosen illustrations, could become featured. I made this exact same request on 19 February, but no comments were ever posted; thus, I'm using the same page again rather than make a pointless archive. Seahen 22:13, 1 July 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Andy t 15:00, 3 July 2006 (UTC)