Wikipedia:Peer review/Outram Park MRT station/archive1

Outram Park MRT station


I've listed this article for peer review because I feel that it can be expanded further and has potential to become a good article or a featured article

Thanks,  Brachy 08  (Talk)  (Contribs)  12:36, 6 June 2023 (UTC)

Comments from Z1720
Comments after a quick skim:


 * The lede can be expanded to incorporate more information from the body of the article.
 * "On 9 March 2022, Transport Minister S Iswaran announced in Parliament that Stage 3 (Caldecott to Gardens by the Bay via Napier), would open in the second half of 2022." Needs a citation.
 * "Artwork" section: per MOS:OVERSECTION these short paragraphps can be merged together.

Those are my thoughts. Z1720 (talk) 14:56, 15 June 2023 (UTC)


 * I’ve begun improving the article. Is there any more ways I can improve it?  Brachy 08  (Talk)  (Contribs)  01:40, 27 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Keep expanding that lede. More sources can be found at WP:LIBRARY, Google Scholar, doaj.org, archive.org and your local library system. Z1720 (talk) 11:52, 27 June 2023 (UTC)