Wikipedia:Peer review/Pan American World Airways/archive1

This informative and interesting article about the major player in the early commercial aviation business could be an excellent FA. Please look it over. Denni &#9775; 15:46, 2005 May 23 (UTC)


 * You need to turn the lead into a summary of the article, its pretty weak now. And make it clear which external links were used as references for writing the article, see Cite sources. A secion on references to Pan Am in film music etc. might be good too I can think of a few places its popped up--nixie 00:07, 24 May 2005 (UTC)


 * GTI has begun painting a couple hundred boxcars in a blue/black scheme with the Pan Am logo prominently displayed on the side of the car. Model decal manufacturers are now producing decals for this scheme as well .  Ref: . Photos:  .  slambo 17:48, Jun 16, 2005 (UTC)