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Para Siempre

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This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I want a second opinion about its contents. Also, I want this article to be as acurate as posible.

Thanks, Jaespinoza (talk) 01:06, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

Comments by As I don't read Spanish, I am not able to check the reliability of the Spanish references, so I'll just work on streamlining the prose. (Tight prose is a must for FAs.)


 * "Para Siempre (Eng.: Forever) is the title of the 79th studio album released by Mexican performer Vicente Fernández. It was written and produced by Joan Sebastian. And it is considered one of the most succesful mariachi recordings in recent times with worldwide sales over a million copies." -> "Para Siempre ("Forever") is the 79th studio album by Mexican singer Vicente Fernández. Written and produced by Joab Sebastian, the album is one of the most successful mariachi records in recent times; it has sold over a million copies worldwide." ✅
 * "Three singles from this album reached Top Ten status on the Billboard Hot Latin Tracks chart: "Estos Celos", "La Derrota" and the title track, which also is used as the main theme of the Mexican telenovela "Fuego En La Sangre". For this album, Vicente Fernández received several nominations for the most prestigious awards, including the Grammy Awards, Latin Grammy Awards and Premios Oye!." -> "Three of the albums singles reached the Top Ten on the Billboard Hot Latin Tracks chart: "Estos Celos", "La Derrota", and the title track, which was used as the main theme of the Mexican telenovela Fuego En La Sangre. The album earned Fernández nominations for a Grammy, a Latin Grammy, and a Premios Oye!." ✅
 * "Jason Birchmeier from Allmusic gave the album a 4 star review, calling the set "a near-perfect album" praising the singing, the songwriting and the instrumentation, naming it "stellar."" -> "Jason Birchmeier of Allmusic gave the album four stars; he called it a "near-perfect album" and "stellar" and praised the singing, the songwriting, and the instrumentation." ✅
 * "Para Siempre is the 79th album recorded by Vicente Fernández and was released on late September, 2007 in several countries including United States, México and Colombia; with this album Fernández is celebrating the 40th anniversary of his singing career, and according to his record label it is on of the most important projects on mexican music, despite a statement from Joan Sebastian, the album producer and songwriter, who declared that the record label did not expect much of this album, which has became on the most important recordings on Fernández career." -> "Para Siempre is the 79th album by Vicente Fernandez, released in September 2007 in several countries. Recorded to celebrate the 40th anniversary of his singing career, the album is, according to Fernández's record label, one of his most important. Producer Joan Sebastian, however, claimed that the label did not have such high expectations of the album." ✅