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Paul McDermott (comedian)

 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for August 2008.
 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for August 2008.

This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I've done a lot of work in expanding it recently and I'd really like to get some other opinions on what needs work and how I can improve it further.

Thanks! -Shoemoney2night (talk) 06:41, 16 August 2008 (UTC)

Comments from :
 * This is a very good article. You may want to submit it to Good Article Nominations in the near future.
 * Make sure that every paragragh has at least one inline citation. Reviewers are getting strict about that.
 * Check the dash use.
 * In a random reference link check, ref 30 was discovered as a deadlink.
 * Busking should be wikilinked
 * Explain that ABC is short for the Australian Broadcasting Corporation in the word's first appearance.
 * If there is any other verifiable content that can be included&mdash;awards, more elaboration on beliefs/views, etc.&mdash;put it in.

All in all, good job with the article. Good luck!
 * Fixed! Thanks so much for the review, it's really appreciated! -Shoemoney2night (talk) 08:59, 21 August 2008 (UTC)