Wikipedia:Peer review/Paul Strand/archive1

Paul Strand
I think most of the glaring problems with the article have been resolved, but it isn't awesome or anything. An editor has decided that viewing everything in his life in the context of Communism is a good idea, but I don't really agree. The current compromise is a section on his politics and I'd be curious to hear people's opinions on all that. Would also like to hear other people's thoughts on what areas of his life need more content. Recury 20:49, 1 September 2006 (UTC)
 * Its definitely too short, more needs to be said about his work and personal life. I'm not sure about how to go about incorporating communist beliefs. If its really controversial how his political beliefs affected his life and work, you may want to keep it seperate. If it isn't contoversial, then I would put within the context of Strand's history. The main issue is that the article needs to be expanded, you will also need to include inline citations where appropriate. Medvedenko 03:36, 2 September 2006 (UTC)