Wikipedia:Peer review/Pavel Bure/archive2

Pavel Bure
It was reviewed years ago, and sent to FAC, which it didn't pass. I recently cleaned up the article, removing over 2000 excess words, and then having it sent through WP:COPYEDITORS, with the hopes of sending to FAC in the near future. But before then I'd like one more review if possible.
 * Previous peer review

Thanks, Kaiser matias (talk) 09:53, 8 January 2018 (UTC)