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Payday 2
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've basically reconstructed this article from an outdated mess. Looking for advice on improvements such as explaining gameplay (since I have about 400 hours into the game and am very poor at explaining it) and writing reception.

Cheers, Zero Serenity (talk - contributions) 17:26, 26 August 2014 (UTC)
 * I recommend you base the lead on Super Smash Bros. Brawl. And reception on Skyrim. NEXT (talk) 17:46, 26 August 2014 (UTC)
 * Skyrim could also be a decent starting point for Gameplay. Any of our FAs on individual games, really. Tezero (talk) 03:43, 27 August 2014 (UTC)
 * I think that, for Gameplay, you should also try looking at the two GA Shin Megami Tensei: Persona games, 3 and 4. They deal with multiple gameplay concepts in a comprehensive way. As to the reception, I think one of the GA Silent Hill games or Tales of Symphonia. I would probably also condense and reference the different game versions and DLC content. --ProtoDrake (talk) 17:15, 27 August 2014 (UTC)
 * I want to condense the versions and DLC content, but until the Crimewave Edition comes out, I cannot, since there is little information on it. Zero Serenity (talk - contributions) 18:00, 28 August 2014 (UTC)

8/28/2014 15:30 Update
I did some padding to the intro and reception. Any specific thoughts? Zero Serenity (talk - contributions) 19:31, 28 August 2014 (UTC)
 * Looks promising, since it's missing gameplay, DLC, and reception. I'd like to also mention how the Sleeping Dogs review is almost over, the only issues bow are date formats because me and Tezero are on our phones and can't open the refs. I'll start working on Payday as soon as Dogs passes, which could be today, for all I know. Is there anyway you can help us, URDNEXT (talk) 19:52, 28 August 2014 (UTC)

I haven't been able to find a lot of good RS for the gameplay - not even a roll call for the special units. Prima didn't put out a guide - I guess they got word of how much would be changed and they held off. Maybe they'll have one for the Crimewave edition. Anyone preorder and get "The Guide of Bain"? --Lenin and McCarthy |  (Complain here) 20:04, 5 September 2014 (UTC)

The Web Series
Produced as an ad, the series might be worth having it's own section. You can watch it here and decide if it's worth mentioning. Zero Serenity (talk - contributions) 13:02, 29 August 2014 (UTC)