Wikipedia:Peer review/Peking Man/archive1

Peking Man


I've listed this article for peer review because the article certainly can be organized better. For example, the question of cannibalism is discussed in great detail in the 2nd and 3rd paragraphs of Age and taphonomy; fire is brought up in a lot of detail in taphonomy, palaeoenvironment, and its own section fire; and most sections are incredibly long and could use some subdivisions but I can't think of any logical ones. Also, comments on general grammar and readability would be appreciated

Thanks,  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 03:28, 6 August 2021 (UTC)