Wikipedia:Peer review/Percy Lavon Julian/archive1

Percy Lavon Julian
Please help review the article for Black History Month


 * It's a pretty decent article, but I have a few suggestions:
 * I think commas would be helpful here: "...discovered that, upon hydrolysis, soy protein acted..." Just my opinion of course.
 * casein could be linked.
 * There's no mention of the difficulties Percy Julian experienced with his Mexico plant (in which he was heavily invested), or of the outcome of his struggles there.
 * If possible I would like to see more about his work at Julian Laboratories.
 * It would be good to see an estimate of the number of his scientific publications in journals and such.
 * It's a minor issue, but there are a few spaces between punctuation and the citation links. It would look tighter if those were removed.
 * Thanks. &mdash; RJH (talk) 20:02, 9 February 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 21:47, 10 February 2007 (UTC)