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Pernambucan Revolt
Hi all, I am a new user on this project, at I just added this article not too long ago. I see that it is generally acceptable, and given the lack of information that is "find"able, I would like to post a general peer review/recruit drive for this article, in order to make it better. OMEN 05:30, 3 July 2006 (UTC)
 * Greetings! This is indeed a good start. One of the first things I noticed however was the inclusion of a list in the introduction. You should try and convert this list into proper prose. While doing this, there is a page setup to help you with the other elements of the introduction too: WP:CITE. Cheers -- darkliight [&pi;alk] 13:17, 3 July 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Andy t 15:01, 3 July 2006 (UTC)