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Persians in Bahrain
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I firmly believe that this page, with much needed edits, can became a Good article. However, I have no clue on where to start so I appeal to the kind Wikipedians to offer me advice. Any feedback is very much appreciated.

Thanks, Droodkin (talk) 20:02, 3 January 2013 (UTC)