Wikipedia:Peer review/Philip Dunne (writer)/archive1

Philip Dunne (writer)
—The preceding unsigned comment was added by JamesMadison (talk • contribs). -- nomination fixed by AndyZ t 14:08, 28 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Per WP:CONTEXT and WP:MOSDATE, years, decades, and centuries without full dates generally should not be linked. For example, January 2006  should not be linked, instead change it to January 2006. Also, please note WP:BTW and WP:CONTEXT, which state that years with full dates should be linked. For example, February 28, 2006,  should be come February 28, 2006. 


 * Please do not extraneously bold items outside of the bolding in the lead.


 * Dates should use either 0 or 2 commas, depending upon the subject of the article; American-related articles should use 2 commas, while British-related articles generally used 0 commas. For example, for two commas: In January 15, 2006, this and that happened, while for zero commas, use: In January 15 2006 this and that happened.


 * This article has little/no images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under WP:IUP and WP:IT that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.


 * Per WP:MOS, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading  ==Magellan's journey== , use  ==Journey== .


 * There are several paragraphs that are too short, which sometimes disrupts the flow of the article. These should either be expanded or merged.


 * For other suggestions that may be applicable to this article, take a look at the list of suggestions located at User:AndyZ/PR.
 * Thanks, AndyZ t 22:21, 28 May 2006 (UTC)