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Pilot (Parks and Recreation)
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to nominate it for FA. (Note: This will be a Wikicup nomination.) I think the article is well sourced and comprehensive, but the prose could probably use a review. Thanks! —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  19:43, 31 January 2010 (UTC)

James26 comments: I mainly just found minor issues, which can be noted in my edit, mostly revolving around punctuation, missing words, redundancy, and a few matters concerning proper tense. I was also a bit confused by the mentions of "the talking-head-style," as I have little idea what that is, having never seen this series and being unfamiliar with the technique. A brief explanation would be nice. For the most part, though, I thought it was a very thorough, well-researched article. -- James26 (talk) 19:21, 10 February 2010 (UTC)