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Planet Relief
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I want to try and get this article up to FA status. If I do, that will result in a triple crown, having just pass GA and being on DYK. I was wondering if there are any ways to expand the article and improve it. It is hard, because it is about a television show that was scrapped before it was broadcast. However, any help would be appreachiated.

Thanks, ISD (talk) 08:09, 2 March 2008 (UTC)

Ruhrfisch comments: This is an interesting article and well written. I ran the semi-automated peer review and added that - sorry it had not been done before. My main concern with getting it to FA status is how brief it is. There are some short FAs (see USS Illinois (BB-65)) but the true question is comprehensiveness of the article. The cancellation section is fairly well developed, but even here there is not much detail on who did what when at the BBC, just official statements and critical response. I think to be truly considered for FA it needs to have much more specific information from reliable sources. I checked on ref (#2) and it offers a few details not in the article ("London Eye, Houses Of Parliament and St Paul’s Cathedral" would have shut off their lights), so I would look more closely at your sources and see if you can find more. This source also has the logo (or at least a logo) which could be used under a fair use rationale. Are there trade journals on TV in the UK that would have more details, or perhaps an envirnmental journal / magazine? Sorry not to have more ideas, hope this helps, Ruhrfisch &gt;&lt;&gt; &deg; &deg; 16:45, 15 March 2008 (UTC)